so if you have been keeping up with my blog at ALL, or know me, you will know i am in a creative writing class. we recently just finished our poetry section and i figured i should post some of my pieces. not because they are amazing, but just to post them.
(plus i know i have like one follower, so might as well right? HA)
so ill start you off with something easy, a Haiku.
(its only three lines!)
I really like to shop,
it brings me so much happiness.
—my wallet hates it—
and since this one has to do this shopping, i will now share with you my sonnet about Nordstrom.
(this is a shakespearian sonnet, which means it has to follow a specific pattern. it was freeking HARD!)
Nordstrom
By Allyson Rengifo
Inviting,
constantly calling my name,
it
holds the key to my wallet and heart.
How
could you not know of its fashion fame?
The
alluringly glamorous isles of art
that
make my heart powerfully cry out
songs
of pure happiness. Who wouldn’t love this?
I
remember when I could run-about
the
store, buying everything with sheer bliss.
Rounders
packed full with oodles of clothing,
Controlling
myself—a difficult deed—
That
would oft times leave me with self-loathing.
You
would think that I would learn to take heed.
This
store will probably put me in debt,
but
it’s a debt I will never regret!
Oh,
how I absolutely love shopping,
nothing
can make me happier. I am
saddened
by the money I am dropping.
These
prices hit me with one big ka-blam.
I
just can’t say no to all the shoes,
which
I will surely one day, for sure, need.
Without
them I will be singing the blues,
fact,
it is unmistakably guaranteed.
I
just want that beautifully crafted blouse
that
fits me oh so well! But at that price,
I
might as well be buy’n my future spouse!
Occasionally
these things make me think twice.
I
always end up swiping that black card.
I
should really stop, but it’s just so hard.
Now i will share my first attempt at writing a rhyming poem, i don't know why, but for some reason i cannot rhyme.
(i am particularly fond of the part about bilbo baggins.)
Attempt I
Allyson Rengifo
I sit here in my bed,
trying to conjure up
rhymes from inside my head.
Nothing comes, but I can’t
let up,
not when there is a grade at
stake.
This poem I must make.
But how am I to do this,
when the only words I can
think of are
Wizards, dragons,
and the story of Bilbo
Baggins.
How sweet would it have been,
to be able to wield a sword,
fight a battle and win,
meet a fancy young lord,
and end up happily ever
after.
But words, I cant seem to
capture.
I can’t yield a sword and
Lords, kings, and dragons
don’t exist.
I cannot rhyme to save my
life
And all I feel from this is
anger and strife.
lastly, i choose to share my place poem, mainly because the other ones are too personal and there are specific people who i don't want seeing them. someone who will remain unnamed. but also because this is the first poem i had to write, and it is probably by far my favorite.
My Place
Allyson Rengifo
This is my new home,
where I reside with three others.
We all have our spaces
and yet
I have no place
within this space.
There are students,
in every direction.
Yet, there is no one
near me.
I am alone,
as I usually am.
two sisters hide behind
their closed doors,
I hear their laughs,
drifting through the hallway.
The other is a mystery,
almost never around.
I have a room,
that looks like all the others.
Worn and used furniture,
walls smothered with patches:
Brighter patches, darker patches,
rough and smooth patches.
Few adornments
hang on the walls.
sad and lonely
against the barren barriers.
A rainbow array of clothes
lay scattered about.
Shoes piled like hills lie
under the bed that
is too tall for me.
I welcome the sunlight.
I often leave windows
and doors open
to let in the cool autumn air.
Fresh bursts of sunlight
make this a happy place.
A place where, in time
I will find my place.
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